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Please pay attention to the following when writing your paper:
•    A good introductory paragraph introduces the paper, not the history of philosophy. Don’t start too broadly.
•    Let the reader know your thesis in your first paragraph. A thesis is a statement that takes a certain position regarding the texts in question and can be defended throughout the essay.
•    Each paragraph should discuss one idea. There should be a clear topic sentence outlining that idea.
•    Be sure to cite all direct and indirect quotes (paraphrases of the texts).
•    Use evidence from the texts to back up each of your claims.
•    Do not summarize the text; analyze it.
•    Finish with a conclusion, in which you rearticulate your thesis. The conclusion is the “so what?” section, in which you can tell the reader why your argument is important.

This paper should:
(1) State your thesis.
(2) Explain objections to your arguments.
(3) Reply to those objections. 
(4) Defend your thesis.

Every objection should be in one paragraph and the one follow should be a replay

The thesis activity will help you to come up with a thesis if you want to change this one.

MY thesis:
In this paper, I will argue that Young Successfully defend her argument about the feminine bodily comportment because it is clearly that women are not working for their full potential therefore, we should change some of the behaviors such as how women represented in the movies or the language used with baby girls in order for women to work for their full potential.