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TASK 1
Please read the attached document named Sabrina’s message. Rewrite a total of twelve sentences out of the thirty-one from Sabrina’s message to improve writing style on a sentence level. For each sentence you revise, identify the sentence number and the type/s of changes you made (some sentences require several types of changes). At a minimum, make at least three of the following types of changes:
-    Changing I-voice to you-voice.
-    Changing passive verbs to active verbs.
-    Converting nouns or be verbs to action verbs.
-    Removing it is/there are statements.

Example: 
See sentence number (20) “We offer three membership levels”.
See below the example on how you are rewriting the sentence.

(20) you may choose from three membership levels. (Changing I-voice to you-voice)

Please remember to make at least three of the following types of changes:
-    Changing I-voice to you-voice.
-    Changing passive verbs to active verbs.
-    Converting nouns or be verbs to action verbs.
-    Removing it is/there are statements.


TASK 2
Rewrite the message. While retaining all the essential content from the original message, rewrite the message to make it more concise and effective. In addition to sentence-level changes, consider combining some sentences, adding formatting to make the message easier to read, and using a table.