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Paper Instructions:

INTRODUCTION: rewrite the paper with this introduction.
1. Introduces topic/gets reader’s attention. (5pts) 2. Provides a brief overview of selected primary source (including publication/release date and creator information). (5pts) 3. Includes a strong thesis statement that: • Is arguable (takes a position). (25pts) • Points towards a larger “So What?” (briefly indicates why this position matters—the larger social/cultural significance). (5pts) • Names specific strategies/resources within the primary

This criterion is linked to a Learning OutcomeBODY:
1. Appropriately introduces 3-5 timely, useful, credible, and relevant secondary sources. (20pts) • At least ONE of these secondary sources is from a peer reviewed article. (10pts) • Quotes/paraphrases relevant information from each secondary sources with appropriate in-text citations. (15pts) • Analyzes this information—describing how these outside claims inform/connect to the argument about the primary source (i.e. support, challenge, further) (25pts) 2. Pulls evidence directly from the primary source. (20pts) • The evidence is focused (the writer does not over-summarize). (20pts) • The evidence is thoroughly analyzed so as to develop the original thesis statement in conversation with the secondary source(s). (30pts) Analysis is key to success in body paragraphs: Any analysis of a quote should be AT LEAST TWICE as long as the quote itself)

CONCLUSION:
1. Includes a conclusion paragraph that restates main points; demonstrating the evolution of argument throughout the paper as it ties back to the original thesis statement. (15pts) 2. Discusses the broader significance of the argument (e.g. why it matters at this moment/to you/in general). (10pts)

MECHANICS/FORMATTING:
- Includes an appropriately formatted Works Cited Page (following MLA guidelines). (10pts) - Is a full 7-8 pages in length (double-spaced, typed in 12-point Times New Roman font, and set to 1” margins). (15pts) - Maintains focus within paragraphs. (5pts) - Transitions clearly between ideas/sections. (5pts) - Is carefully edited for grammatical errors as well as typos. (5pts)

!!!!!Furthermore, my research paper lack a argument of monster and the new argument is that everyone will make deals with monsters to exchange something better. The monsters in Cinderella can be her step-mother and her sister. After all, after her deal with them, she gets her own happiness. Also, correctly integrate  secondary sources (right now it is unclear which sections of your essay are paraphrasing others' work and which are your own original claims), develop focused analysis (you need to ground your argument in details from the text), and articulate a thesis that meets the goals of an academic-style essay.  The quotes of secondary must be precise and secondary sources must be relevant to my argument of this paper. The total amount of secondary sources should be 5 and one must be peer-reviewed. The original secondary sources can be changed to new relevant secondary sources.